Looking For Beta Readers
Feb. 11th, 2014 09:11 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
selenite0Hi, folks.
I've completed a first draft of my space opera novel, Torchship. I'm looking for a few people to give it a read and give me feedback on how well it works--does the plot make sense, are the characters real, and so on (finding typos is appreciated but not what I'm worried about right now). The key response I need is if you didn't finish it, where did you stop? I can supply most ebook formats.
Blurb:
A captain who'll take any job if there's enough money in it. A pilot with an agenda of her own. And a mechanic with an eye on the pilot. The crew of the Fives Full are trying to make enough money to keep themselves in the black while avoiding the attention of a government so paranoid it's repealed Moore's Law. They're not looking for adventure in the stars . . . but they're not going to back down just because something got in their way.
If you're interested, please leave a comment with your email and preferred format. Thanks!
I've completed a first draft of my space opera novel, Torchship. I'm looking for a few people to give it a read and give me feedback on how well it works--does the plot make sense, are the characters real, and so on (finding typos is appreciated but not what I'm worried about right now). The key response I need is if you didn't finish it, where did you stop? I can supply most ebook formats.
Blurb:
A captain who'll take any job if there's enough money in it. A pilot with an agenda of her own. And a mechanic with an eye on the pilot. The crew of the Fives Full are trying to make enough money to keep themselves in the black while avoiding the attention of a government so paranoid it's repealed Moore's Law. They're not looking for adventure in the stars . . . but they're not going to back down just because something got in their way.
If you're interested, please leave a comment with your email and preferred format. Thanks!
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Date: 2014-02-13 02:34 am (UTC)Um . . .
Never mind, all good.
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Date: 2014-02-13 02:39 am (UTC)emperorofthemoon@peoplepc.com gave me a bounce message, where would you like me to send the file?
Thank you!
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Date: 2014-02-14 05:02 am (UTC)I'm surprised. I'm a horrible speller without a spell-check.
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